All Comments on 'The Girl in the Mirror'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fun little vignette.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh I'd love to hear more about the reflection!

datavoringdatavoringalmost 3 years ago

It's the eyes for me...

acrasoftacrasoftalmost 3 years ago

I know some people like to keep the magic, but this could definitely be expanded. I would read it.

inhalesdeeplyinhalesdeeplyalmost 3 years ago

Very nice. Personally, I dont like stories that go on and on for pages but I do think think that you could expand on this. Its a very exciting idea and I'd like to hear more x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
More Mirror

This could be expanded so well - next chapter please

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