All Comments on 'The Girl in the Red Cloak Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Rescued!

One of these times, Lukas and Clara will "get it on" because they will "Finally" realize they care deeply for each other! Let their lovemaking be rich and enjoyable and a rich comment on their deepening love!

peaches07peaches07about 7 years agoAuthor
Ch. 8

I'm so sorry, guys. I came back with every intention of finishing quickly and in a timely manner, but I've lost my baby kitty of 14 years and the will to write has left me. I hope to get back to it in a few weeks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
my condolences

I have a cat that's 14 I would be devastated. They squirm their way deep in our hearts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sorry about your kitty

I have a cat of my own, and just think of losing her makes me hurt for your loss. Your stories are very good, so it's no problem at all to wait patiently for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So Glad You're Back!

I was so excited to see that you uploaded some new chapters! Love the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I love how we can really see their feelings developing for each other

On a side note, I'm really sorry to hear about your cat :( I know you're going through a difficult time so no worries about the chapter, we all understand!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Pure talent

You are such a talented writer. I look forward to the chapters to come. I also want to let you know that I absolutely love all of your writings. Please continue soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
please continue

please continue your great stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Waiting

I am patiently waiting for the next couple of chapters, though I do hope that the chapter length increases. I personally find it a little more difficult to invest in stories with shorter chapters and your story is very much about emotional investment. Take care and I hope to see more chapters soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
you are very talented writer

Please finish this story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please finish story

This story is so good, i hunger fir more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Accidentally pressed a Star.

Wasnt even paying attention, would've given it five stars. Just bear in mind that one of the one Star reviews is supposed to be five stars :) 😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Loved the story

I know you're probably not writing it anymore given the length of time since you finished this chapter, but would love to know what happens!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I am very sad to see yet another great story unfinished on this site. There must be a reason you stopped writing and I am sorry for it because you are a very talented writer.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

I'm going to echo the sentiment. It's epically sad that we're left hanging without a conclusion to such a great work of art. I gave you a 5/5 even so.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Come baaaaaack

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