All Comments on 'The Girl in the Tiny Black Dress'

by Scorpius1945

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ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 7 years ago
Strange but enjoyable!

Unusual locale and story, unlike those of any other story I've read here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Seriously Weird!

Nina speaks broken English, yet her fellow countrymen talk like American rednecks.

There is a form of art known as "art naive", which is often crude and jarring, with no recognition of the basic guidelines that help make a painting pleasing to the eye. This seriously odd contribution here might be called "lit naive".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Huh?

“... the son of his mother’s sister who had died in a car crash.” Is he his own cousin? He is the son of his mother. Who died in the car crash? Himself, his aunt?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Super story! Love erotic adventures with steamy sex that conclude with "happily ever after" endings!

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