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All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
my pet hate

Started off well but you lost me when her name changed from delilah to tamara

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Interesting premise...

has definite add=on possibilities. Definitely has the makings of a continuing story. Thank you.

rg27612rg27612almost 11 years ago
who did what to whom?..

Good storyline, but better outlining/proofreading sill keep character names straight. Look forward to more.

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