All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door Ch. 04'

by Kingmaker711

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BlacklipsBlacklipsalmost 11 years ago
Glad you moved this to sci-fi

Erotic horror is a huge turn off for most people but what you have here will change people's taste!!! now I'm really worried this will just be another unfinished story like so so SO many other that is stuck in the "hiatus" limbo, with the author disappearing.

Since you said you will now be writing much less frequent now, perhaps you can write longer chapters? like 3-4 pages? I'd hate to wait for months for an update and only have one page of content when it finally arrived. It's just a suggestion, i don't take your story for granted so.... as always, 5 stars for you

LiterKnightLiterKnightalmost 11 years ago
Me gusta

I like your other stories, and as the other comment says, was a bit leery of erotic horror, but it's actually amazing, just like the other stories you've written.

TernomTernomalmost 11 years ago

I love this story, please keep at it :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
More Please!

I have really enjoyed the chapters of this story and i am looking forward to the next chapters.

lottie_8853lottie_8853almost 11 years ago
Love

I love it!! Please please write more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This needs to be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Interesting

This has a good deal of possibility, but the whole death of the unborn child thing and the general hopelessness despite even hinting at a brighter outcome... It is hard to fap too.

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