All Comments on 'The Girl of My Dreams'

I enjoyed this story. It was cute and sexy but it was too short.

Did you say not overly sexual? WOW! That was the most beautiful, romantic and sexy story I have read in a long long time!!! It made me happy and tingly and lots of emotions, all good! Why cant life be just like that? I'd love a part two, and longer.

Adorable little story.

This story was delicious i felt tingly. It definitely needs to be a part two part two PLEASE!!