All Comments on 'The Girl Who Cried Wolf 01'

Great Team effort. take your time and stretch this one out. Maybe she can even earn her dance classes......eventually. Test her for dyslexia and find it...eventually.

Romance wasnt' built in a day!

This is really good. I'm a little disappointed at how actually perverted the teacher is, and the way she lost her cherry. I was hoping for a little more romance, but it was not to be. However, these two characters are great and this is well written.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I see several sub plots that could develop.

I wonder if you have chosen the ending yet?

I expect to enjoy it.

A really interesting play on personalities along with sexy scenes but different. Keep up the good work. Thank you.

Two screwed up characters who need each other in, almost literally, the worst possible way. And I hung on every word.

It was like an incredibly hot train wreck. You can't look away, and a very dirty part of you doesn't want to.

Please sir (and ma'am), may we have some more?

Where is the rest? This can't end without more information. More please.

I belive this is one of the best ive read on this site. Id love to read more!

Great characters! Wish there were another few chapters.... maybe the roomies get involved?