All Comments on 'The Girl with Brown Hair Ch. 01'

You really need to write something to hook your readers. Chapter one is short and it doesn't make me (the reader) anxious/eager to see what happens next.

...why people persist in posting such ridiculously short pieces.

As the previous comment notes, the brevity precludes any possibility of hooking the reader in.

I suggest you remove the listing and re-post when your "story" has some substance.