All Comments on 'The Girl with No Name Ch. 05'

seems a bit stiff and awkward - almost as if it had been translated from some Eastern European language.

simply fascinating.

I don't think this story is stiff or awkward AT ALL!!!! I think it's absolutely AMAZING & love it, I started it this morning & have not stopped reading yet. I particularly like the author's notes and explanations at the end of the chapters which give deeper insight into the character's motivations or in this chapter the translation of her nickname. It's well written, there were a few grammar errors but not enough to distract from the story. Stories like THIS are why I come here at all. ~M.L.

NOTE: Sorry! I switched phones & forgot my login info here, and haven't set up another account yet because I don't want my new boyfriend to catch me reading a site called "Literotica"... somehow I always find otherwise amazing guys who are 40 year old virgins (8 in a row!!!) or are pretty darn close.