All Comments on 'The Girl with the Freckles Pt. 04'

As any warm blooded human I liked this one quite a bit but I do hope you save it for special occasions otherwise it'll dilute the story and make sexy times dull in the long run. Happy for Janet getting into the band (she sure is full of surprises), love Julia to pieces (she really is adorable kinky red pixie), the best of all it seem that Janet's mom likes him too so I'm looking forward to the full family inspection.

4* this time as there were quite some grammatical errors lying around, might want to get editorial help in the board section.

Would you care to contact me directly to discuss your feedback!

Thank you for taking the time to write and I appreciate the hard work and dedication it takes to pull of a story not to mention a several chapter story. I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. Sincerely M

Received your feedback, much appreciated. This story has legitimate autobiographical as well as counterfactual elements, and writing it is proving to be a cathartic experience. It means something to me, I'm glad it resonates with you.

Would you like to write any questions to My Mistress?

My Mistress did text me before midnite:

"W0W W0W W0W THANX G0D 4 THIS W0NDERFUL ST0RY I L0VE IT"

Angel is reading Chapter Four.

and Angel texted a second time:

"SUPER NYC WOW WOW GOD GOD GOD WOW"

teamhumanity@live.com

Btw, a 5 !!!!!

Arguably some of the best writing I've seen on Literotica. And the content is pretty damn good as well! Thanks!

Thanks so much for your kind words; part 5 is in the works, look forward to any feedback and constructive criticism.

Yeah, you sure can write!

Thank you!