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All Comments on 'The Girl with the Silver Trombone'

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HeadguyHeadguyover 12 years ago
Loved it!

It's a shame you didn't get it done in time for the contest, but a story this good won't go unappreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot!

Wow! That was really hot!

chargergirlchargergirlover 12 years ago
Awesome!

Nice Christmas story! Next year finish in time for the contest, dumbass! lol ;) xo *muah*!

TLMorganTLMorganover 11 years ago
Love the story!

I loved Ellie's and the old man's characters. Must do another installment!

ChattyCathy369ChattyCathy369over 10 years ago
Great Story

Love both girl's and the old man's characters too. You have really written some good stories.

thebug37thebug37about 8 years ago
. . .and A Happy New Year

Religion has it's own way of making things right - a girl of teen age and an older man practiced their own religious beliefs. Five should be a ten - but this is all I can give.

readergeereadergeeover 4 years ago
Puzzled

How is she going to attend Stanford and be married to the old man?

chytownchytownalmost 2 years ago

****Good read, Thanks for sharing.

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