by Susan Strict
i really liked the style, very nice, would love to see more, similarly themed.
Loved this story, very cleverly written. Would like to have a follow up though, that is, what the girls did after the 15 minutes, and what they went on to do next
I try to make it a policy to not give a bad rating just because I don't like a story but, in this case, I'm going to make an exception.
This is certainly not a BDSM story and it's certainly not femdom. Really, as far as I'm concerned it's just a snuff story and shouldn't be here at all. Since it is here, then I think there should be a warning, perhaps in the form of an authors note at the beginning of the story that this is snuff.
Unfortunately, I didn't get that warning and, well.... Let's just say that some things once read cannot be unread, but I sure wish they could be.
One star, and only because I cannot give less.
I do like this story, however, "thumbs down" (which was sheathing the thumb inside the fist) actually was an order to spare the defeated gladiator. "Thumbs up" was an order to execute.