All Comments on 'The Gnome Chronicles Pt. 02'

Hi,

You have great starts, but don't finish the story/chapter/scene.

Not sure how to reply to your comment directly, but upon reviewing the chapter (and cringing at the grammatical errors), I see what you mean. As I wrote it, I finished it off thinking "I'll let the reader's imagination take it from here," and I've done that many times. These stories need tighter conclusions. I'll work on that moving forward.