All Comments on 'The Goblin King'

Needs expanding or a Part 2. Everything has been set up for some great sex and lesbian scenes between all the characters, they just need to be written now, with exacting detail. Like I said, great story hope to read more soon.

Finish this!!!!

Loved it need more!

Phenomenal concept, but you basically skip over the sex completely. Which is too bad, because this would have been hot as shit.

Enough said?

Was hoping for an actual happy ending. Disappointed.

What a fantastic setup and sexy interesting characters! The buildup was incredible and I liked the goblin story, but it was over much too quickly and easily, and without more chapters it's very disappointing, like a hot date with delicious foreplay that ends with your date disappearing and leaving you frustrated and thinking of what could have been.