All Comments on 'The Goddess'

A nice start to an interesteing story.

... with poor spelling, lack of proof reading and ignorance of homonyms - words that sound the same bur are spelled differently and mean different things.

Example - 'your' and 'you're'!

'Your' is possessive - belonging to you.

'You're' is a shortened form of 'you are'!

""My name is Urd and your Jason, yes?" - "My name is Urd and you are Jason, yes?"

You have a great start here but you need to go farther. I love the idea but add a little more detail. A good start to many avenues of approach.