by AlexisPeignoir
Written well enough, but too much was a repeat of Ch. 1 and the end was a bit of an anti-climax. I was expecting her to have some perverted demand when it came to the crunch.
there is a Virginia!
Don't listen to critics who hide behind their keyboard. Less suspense and playing as the first chapter, but still a helluva story. Descriptive, sexy and takes the reader aling with Derek as he relishes every detail of Virginia.
Makes one want MORE!
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Lee
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