All Comments on 'The Goddess of Romonus Ch. 02'

Love it!!! Please continue :)

Really lookin foward to more chapters in your story, I am quite intrigued! Keep up the good work and keep me updated :)

Good story, very hot, but suffers from grammar mistakes. Maybe you should get an editer. :)

I'm really enjoying the story, but the spelling errors are very distracting. Please look into an editor/proofreader. I'll still read the next chapter (If there is one), spelling errors and all, it would just be more enjoyable if they were corrected.

A piece?! Is his dick in pieces?

That really jolted me out of the story. Like others said, get an editor. The grammatical errors and wrong word choices are making it too distracting and scary to read.

Five out of five. But both a sex and a writing tip is that slow burning things have greater outcomes. So slow things down - but not too much though - and explain things a bit more :) Damn I wish I could type emojis

Terrible. Grammar.

Noooo please add more!!! I'm in love with this world and I feel like there is so much more you can build on and add !! I do agree that grammar was a problem but I overlooked it due to how good this story was!!

Its sad that so many stories go unfinished

I cannot believe that this story was written many years ago, but never finished. It's tragic. The potential is limitless. I wish someone with a talent of writing would finish it. I'm craving a continuation of this story.