All Comments on 'The Going Price'

Ok, so I thought he was a bit of a cad for screwing her but what do I know about people. I really thought your line "but at least we weren't going to be alone and unloved anymore." was wonderful. I hope you write at least one more part to this modern day Pygmalion (My Fair Lady for the movie version)

I can't say it was erotic, if anything, it was depressing...but in a good way. You made the characters real, you gave them depth and emotion and that is what made this story work. Great story. Keep up the good work.

It was awesome to read, but I kind of wish you had written more at the end.

Enjoyable read. Thanks

The first part makes the sex wonderfully uplifting :D

Love the story, the emotional feeling of the story, and the direction the story was heading at stories end. Damn it, it made me feel good! It's a 5-star and a favorite .......

Great.