All Comments on 'The Golden Tempest Ch. 01'

by Hornydog354

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Any chance of a second chapter

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
keep writing

we need the hotter sequel

mcbtwsmcbtwsover 5 years ago
She's a Racist little egotistical cunt.

There, I fixed the title for you.

stufdshirtstufdshirtover 5 years ago
Get a Proofreader

Your grammar is horrible... It made for a very difficult read. I had to stop and reread many times to understand what you wanted to get across,

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