All Comments on 'The Good Girl'

Good realistic story, reminds me of my first time with my virgin girlfriend, just wonderful. Virgin on virgin should be, can be, and is the best !!

Innocence lost, love discovered. Great read. I like all your stories and they just keep getting better. 5 stars--wish I could vote more than once.

I love this story. Deja vu remembering my first time. I like the way you develop a story and the characters. You are my all time favorite author.

xoxoxox

Great character development and realistic pace. Keep up the great work.

I was bored half way down the first page.

Great story, nice buildup, I hope there's a part two.

Anon below just want a quick jack-off story and don't have any idea what good writing is all about.

Here's a story just for you:

I slammed my 14inch cock into my mama's cunt, while I sucked on her perky FFF tits. Then I shoved my giant pole up her ass, pulled in out and cummed all over her face. The end.

Really enjoyed the story. Liked the build-up. Would have liked to have seen the sex scenes more descriptive and drawn out.

"Here's a story just for you: I slammed my 14inch cock into my mama's cunt, while I sucked on her perky FFF tits. Then I shoved my giant pole up her ass, pulled in out and cummed all over her face. The end."

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So nice to see that a 10-year old has discovered how to use his mother's computer.. Congratulations, boy; so glad you have a fantasy that keeps you warm at night.

Would have like a second or third story as the relationship builds!

Nicely done. You have a real talent.

as well as the good boys. When the good girls do it with the good boys, it is known as a 'good fuck.' However, there is no such thing as a bad fuck.

Good story.

Great job and a wonderful story with a good buildup. A bit more detail on their orgasms would be welcomed. Keep it up.

Saying "scholarship to Juliard" got me off

Very romantic!!!

Spoiled by the crap about the pill he should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

This is story land no VD or babies

@anonymous

",,,he should have just pushed is cock in as deep as it would go and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy..."

Yes, would be more erotic to thrust deep into her unprotected good girl pussy and explode his spermy cum into the depths of her innocence...