All Comments on 'The Good Girl Ch. 01'

oh yes... well done

Real hot - can't wait for the rest of the chapters

I cannot wait for more! Please write more of these two sluts getting gangbanged, my pussy is drenched after this story! I loved it!

I love the descriptions, I'll be back to read this a second time....

Man this is one HOT story! Please write more just like it.

I got another load of cum in my pants for you to swallow! Your story turned me on THAT much -- and I'm at work! I look forward to reading more. BTW I also keep reptiles as pets, cool. It was like a Male's fantasy told from a woman's point of view. Could it possibly be true?

This is definitely one of my favorites. Keep up the good work!

I really like the way you think, and write. You put a lot of hot sex into your work, and make it readable. I'll read more of this hot cum dripping story. Got my attention with the good ass fucking that was going on with cum dripping out of all her holes.Sounds like the girl needs a tongue bath. Thanks for the turn on.........Rich

I just got around to start reading The Good Girl series. What a fantastic start! This is so hot, I can keep cumming to it over and over again! It was extremely well written as well. I can't wait to read more chapters!

This is one fantastic story. Can't wait for more! Please more! RCG

This is a really hot story, I loved it, but you suggested that these stories are true. So I wondered if you and your girl friend received tips for your services that night. I would think that it would only be fair that a tip bucket would placed in the room to compensate you for messing up your clothes.

The story is a erotic masterpiece and very sensually & provacatively portrayed with no inhibitations at all

Thanks for writing this, I love group sex and this has all the right details and features.

Can't wait to check out more of your work.

Love the story, cant wait to share the other chapters with my wife :)

you are one hot writer. are you a performer stories?

i fucked my pussy with a vibrator and came 3 times reading this but accidentally rated it low trying to not get cum on the kyboard so i'll ust rate all your stories 5 every one i read i like

That was incredible!! You are a talented erotic writer! Kudos!!!