All Comments on 'The Good Neighbor Ch. 02'

nice story

Great story, and excellent writing, keep this one going please!

The emotional attachment and the lessons learned by our hero made this a very well written and enjoyable story. Thanks.

Kudos.

Well written. Smart. Clever. Thoughtful.

Keep it up!

Craig

And what happened with the baby you made with Lynn? It's too bad that she did not figure it good if you and her had worked on a sibling or two with this first one. What happened if her husband proved to be of a low sperm count and could not breed her?

You need to make a continuation to this story telling us if Lynn's hubby turned out to have a low sperm count or not? Perhaps then Lynn would want to make another baby with you?

I thought this one was much better than the first chapter - the language was crisp, the pace was better, and the sex was hot!!