All Comments on 'The Good Soldier Pt. 02'

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nthusiasticnthusiasticalmost 6 years ago
Better Depth

I liked the new characters introduced. They came as a bit of a surprise, yet it's logical they would have asked officers initially before going on to lower ranks. I expected a bit more dialogue with the General as an after-action report or debriefing. His outburst seemed out of proportion but I can see his stress.

Alice's tactics of division & negotiation are paying off, with her new bunk mates as well as the scientists. She's getting a chance to build real relationships so they see her as a person, not just a toy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting Tease

Did anyone else notice that line that Givens threw out so angrily? That the men are within a hair's breadth of being killed? So whatever they are working on involves powerful forces that are potentially dangerous. Interesting. I'm guessing we are going to learn more about this scientific breakthrough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting character development

Nuf said. More please.

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