All Comments on 'The Grand Slam Breakfast'

by clarissaj1982

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hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booalmost 8 years ago
Thank you.

Highly imaginative, I love the originality, the quirk- your work. Keep writing, it's so rewarding to find some one who is different and presents the whimsical foibles of humanity so well. Thank you.

qarlcueqarlcuealmost 6 years ago
Denny's Play

I've been to lots of Denny's restaurants over the years, so I can picture the waitress in uniform, the booth you're sitting at, the windows and the cars going by on the street, the Grand Slam Breakfast on the classic Denny's plate. It's fun to add the verbal picture your story paints to my memories. Next time I'm in a Denny's, I hope I think of you sitting in the next booth, playing for a friend, privately getting all turned on and such. Thanks for the enjoyable tale!

zooliciouszooliciousalmost 2 years ago

2016 was a good year.

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