by JohnKnuckles
I can't wait to see this story continued. I really liked the way you set everything up. Great to see a good humiliation themed story that relies heavily on tropes, thats the kind of story I like : ).
You write like a professional writer. The way you set up and describe each mini-scene with minimal words helped make this story exceptional - I mean, how do you top that finale?. The problem I see is how you can possibly make a Chapter 2 which fails to disappoint after this? I await the next chapter with bated breath.
Wow, what a great story. This is exactly what I like. The only small suggestion from me is to describe the outfits of the women who's being stripped, in detail. The rest is just perfection...