All Comments on 'The Greatest Humiliation Story Ch. 01'

by JohnKnuckles

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jlorthiajlorthiaalmost 9 years ago
Good start

I can't wait to see this story continued. I really liked the way you set everything up. Great to see a good humiliation themed story that relies heavily on tropes, thats the kind of story I like : ).

CallMeABritCallMeABritalmost 9 years ago
Absolutely loved this story

You write like a professional writer. The way you set up and describe each mini-scene with minimal words helped make this story exceptional - I mean, how do you top that finale?. The problem I see is how you can possibly make a Chapter 2 which fails to disappoint after this? I await the next chapter with bated breath.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

Wow, what a great story. This is exactly what I like. The only small suggestion from me is to describe the outfits of the women who's being stripped, in detail. The rest is just perfection...

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

chytownchytownalmost 9 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Awsone

Best story i ever read

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