All Comments on 'The Grocery Store'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not consensual

...it's rape

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Dumb-

Wonderful premise, crude story. Sometimes crude is also ugly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Ugly story-not erotic,but rape

Totally obscene story-ugly ugly piece of crap! No romance-only foul rape!

Obviously by a "wanker" ! Go play with your shlong you bastard! Fuck you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Clearly not rape

That's all i gotta say

Loves_music_loves_to_danceLoves_music_loves_to_danceover 9 years ago
She loved it

You all are crazy... She loved it... Begged for it. Awesome story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Having searched through the story for the part where the girl says "no", and not finding it, I can only conclude that some of the posters here somehow accidentally posted comments to the wrong story (or maybe have some kind of brain damage).

It's a really beautiful story, would love to read a continuation if you write one :)

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteover 9 years ago
Enjoyable

great help with the groceries. That only happens on paper, but that is why stories are written like this. Thank you for feeding my fantasy...and making my morning....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
not rape...obviously

To all those fuckers who say "this is clearly not rape....there's no rape in here....blah blah blah" I mean like obviously theirs no rape in the tags so why would you thinks there's rape in here? Df?!?!

Anywhore good job nicely written

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