by justincbenedict
I thought this story was pretty well thought out considering that it wasn't at all in chronological order. It's a bit brutal on Kim the protagonist though, she's been through so much, all her money taken, abandoned by her Master and finally abused by all her friends. Would have liked to see Alex come back and read about how he assesses the situation. A bit of character development from after he visits Tess would be thrilling:)