All Comments on 'The Guardians Ch. 00'

and wouldnt mind to read some more, thanx.

this story has certain piqued my interest, good detail & build up...more please

This is a great start and I hope you will continue as I am hooked already.

This has potential to be a very good plot. I do hope you have continuation to this because I think it is very good. Plus, your writing makes it wonderful to read; flows well and in a logical way.

M.C.... are you a student at Princeton? For firstly... your writing shows you're clearly intelligent and the knowledge of the history as well as the exact locations... I'm impressed! I did a google on some of the things you wrote and I think you did your research well.

Great job!

But where's the sex babe! Bring on the love!

This started out well and grabbed my interest. I look forward to reading more.

I really like what you have so far and can't wait to read more.

My title says it all.

Yes, it's nicely written as those below me has commented. Intelligently written but you are poor in spelling LOL. Twice you have put that down as 'burry' instead of bury. Maybe you overlooked that but the computer should have pick it out for you so do becareful with spelling. And ermm, do write faster?

Great build up... I think you have a structure for this story right and that there's more? Hope the sex comes soon! your two characters are just sizzling! I wanna know more more more! Come on! hurry up!

Come on! Dun leave us gussing! pls write faster!

Oh... and I'm from N.J too! (if you are)

Come on! Dun leave us gussing! pls write faster!

Oh... and I'm from N.J too! (if you are)

Good work for the first time. Do write faster :)

I find it strange that most of the best writers are in the NonHuman category. They really have the best imagination and can weave a hell of a story. And you're one of them! I think your tag line caught my eye! But I hope you will explain in the following chapters some of those names that you've used ok? Plus, I want to see the horsemen in action!

I really hope you've already sent in your next chapter because I am already hooked! you're so smart ah, leave the story hanging like that. Who the hell is Anicii Juliana was exactly the response you wanted from us right? I absolutely LOVE fantasy erotica.

I saw the comments below about the Nonhuman genre as having the best writers and I agree! I am not really a big fan about aliens and all these weird creatures having sex with humans... but this is well written with a proper plot. I hope the sex comes soon!

Your nick is very interesting just as your writing. Well, MC, do write your next chapter soon. I know that this is one writer I will always check in on often!

Sorry I'm putting too many comments on your page. I didn't want to email you as you might not read it.

Anyway, I did some research on my own... and I went to read Dante's Divine Comedy... wow it's really long! I'm really really impressed that you actually know this book! I assume you got your 'cues' from this 'muse' eh?

I like the scene of the four siblings. Is there a significance that they all start their names with A? What kind of name is Abben and Aqurico actually... never heard of them. I am guessing they are the apocalyse right? This is a very ingenious! Hahaha. I don't think anyone has ever wrote about this before. Good job!

Absolutely

You do a wonderful job describing the setting as well as the characters themselves. I am guessing that those Guardians' names are pretty ancient.

I jumped straight to chap 1 and was wondering 'what?' and I'm so glad your prologue kept me interested enough to go back and read the first chapter! Do write more!

write more!

babe, I read your chapter 1 and this... is just amazing!

looking forward to more

I'm hoping for more action!

I remembered reading Dante before... or heard of it vaguely. This story sure piqued my interest. Good job!

Loved it! I'm going to read the rest of the chapters. Refreshing!

this looks like it is going to be one hell of awesome saga!! Thank you so much for posting this series.

Beautifully written first chapter. Can't wait to get my teeth into the rest of it, but since it's almost 3am, I have to go to bed *sniffle* Damn you for making such captivating reading!

Loving it so far.. wish I had a handfull of thumbs so I could give it 10 thumbs up!!!

You have made me want to read Dante' s Infro. sorry for the bad spelling...lol

I hope that the rest is just as good or better.

Love the story and the plot so far. Amazing. Although, grammatically it could have some work done. You keep changing tense which I find extremely distracting.