All Comments on 'The Guest Speaker'

Lovely intro, girl's bashfulness ( and lust) both erotic and comic. It's nice for a change, to see the Cinderella girl get the Prince. Keep writing!

First fiction here, however your relaxed style suggests you've written before? Autobiographical - hope so? Love a sexy romance.

You left me hanging!! I want more please.

Also, I love how you described their lovemaking. Not too detailed, but specific and unique enough that I actually read it.

Keep writing !!

it was a nice read, very vivid at parts, but I'd like the sex to be as detailed. The bathroom scene was a great build up; the delivery should have been the same throughout - we needed more of it to get off, to put it bluntly. And don't listen to poisonous comments with no constructive criticism to give. I'll admit the dude in the story came across as a bit creepy, but you should learn from that, as an author. Portray your character with a more reasonable pace to their advances next time. You've potential!

would like to read more from you...

also curious what stories you like on here

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