All Comments on 'The Gymnast Ch. 02: Sex Education'

as far as the writing, it is getting better, Becca is right if Sex Education was like this then every boy and even girls would take it, however I do not like the word "Pet" when talking about Becca, but this is just my opinion

I loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one. Keep it up and keep it hot.

five star coming your way, well written, and quite seductively written. have you noticed I like seduction?, I guess the submissive in me is coming out. just like your story portrays, please keep going.

Honest criticism done kindly & respectfully is not "trolling". If you get upset by comments that are constructive & critical you may be too thin skinned to learn from your mistakes. Nuff said. You've lost me as a reader. Probably not a big deal to you, which is really a damned shame.

The love making is too fast how about creating soft slow sensual arousal you have lost me too

Men writing about lesbians is just dumb. Men can't possibly feel like a woman. You spend so much time on the girl's shaving her pussy. There's nothing more erotic than a woman's pubic hair, but guys think a bald pussy is hot. That's because of lesbian porn. Also you make Becca appear simple minded. Thus, your story is not credible. And not very erotic.