All Comments on 'The Haberdasher Ch. 02'

by AaronAardvark

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I like the idea of Annabelle and Keith getting into bondage and dom/sub play, but I wish it had been more consensual. Having her spring it upon him all of a sudden, without making sure he was cool with it first, put a bit of a damper on the festivities, as it were. Maybe try to keep it more consensual and mutual in future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Lovely Frilly Things

Both your Haberdasher stories are so exciting and juicy with frilly underwear and outrageous parties it made me read again some of your other fantasies. They make even more exciting reading than the first time.

Mary

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