All Comments on 'The Half-Breed's Journey'

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This has some interesting possibilities for a series....Please add more soon....tks Sarah

I agree with Sarah. Interesting story......keep it going.

Good story in all aspects don't stop it here?

nice story cruel. and I love your merman story, thanks for sending it to me. It gave me some ideas.

could easily be a series if you wanted to and enuff peeps alrdy posted that they like it.. so go for it!

Great story, I think it would be intresting if Helen made the demon her guide and only feed him when she wants to.

Other than a few spelling errors this was a very good story.

You should continue this story because it could become truly great.

Oh, I liked it!

This was one of the best I have read! I agree you could take this story much further! This was the first story I have read where I didn't get bored and skip to the end! Great work!

I'm going to find you Cruel, lol. That has to be the wildest one yet... hehe, and loved it ;)

~M

at least I hope it's just a start. You have written a great stand alone story that should be expanded upon. Watching our heroin find and discover herself could be very interesting. Add to that the fact that the demon thinks she lied, will he try and come after her? So much potential with this one. So please continue this story.

...really good.

Especially for something that seems to be out ouf your normal comfort zone.

I really enjoyed it!

Whore rabbit?

Great start. Poor frustrated demon, I enjoyed that twist on the classic theme. :) And the idea that lying is humans most powerful ability is a fascinating one. I look forward to seeing where you take this story. Thanks for sharing.

Solid story with raunchy sex - just how I like my fantasy adventures.

I do hope you continue this line; it has a lot of potential and you are doing a great job with it.

i wouldve asked him to come and stay with me heh not let him be fucked by lowlifes

Sex, adventure, special powers, great story-perfect.

This is nicely written girl!

Liked this very much!