All Comments on 'The Halloween Dangler'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sequel

Hope you have more chapters planned

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Excellent!

A lovely story told with a lot of understated humour with plenty of what I expect is Aussie jokes that made me smile if not laugh outright. I hope you do well, best of luck!

XXX Nicole

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yawn

Lost me early - character began by just bitching about everything to the point of being completely disposable. Perhaps the bitching is an extension of the author's own dismissal of humanity at large - very hipster millennial in attitude - smarter and holier than thou. Couldn't bring myself to click on the second page...

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 7 years ago
Very Interesting Story

It sounds like it's set in Australia, I love the vernacular used. Keep writing, and keep this story going!

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