All Comments on 'The Handyman Ch. 01'

Good start, love to hear more, a bit longer would be great.

Looking forward to successive chapters. Joe sounds as if he will be one very sexy dude!

Your story premise is good, and your writing is fine, but this is only about one quarter of a first chapter. Perhaps you should post 3 or 4 at a time for this story. I look forward to more.

I like the premise but chapter one is only seven paragraphs?? I hope subsequent chapters are going to be substantially longer.

I hope your future chapters are longer . This one ran out way too damn fast . Put 2 or more together to make at least a 2 page read . Good story line , hope to see where it goes .

I think the word is mourn, not morn

Finish the story before you publish it. very very frustrating to have it just stop.

Like some of the others who commented, I would like a.longer story than what you posted here. However, I have read both parts of Cindy Lou, and however you present it I will likely read it. Please keep on posting.

Good intro for setting the premise of the story. But a little too formulaic

Thanks for the read