All Comments on 'The Hanky Code Pt. 04: The Enema'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
The Blindfold Problem

First, very intriguing story. I look forward to much more. The first-person blindfolded person is a tough story to tell. You want us to see what's happening and the narrator can't see. Using the attendant to tell the narrator what he sees so we can know the visual details, creates too much distance from the action. Then you want us to hear the feelings of the cowboy. Try using closely-attached third person or ditch the gasmask until much later and add a mirror. I will read more.

playtime999playtime999over 7 years ago
ass ho

that was awesome; incredibly inventive and perverse. I was wishing it was me on the horse with my ass filling up and my belly bloating and my cock too hard to believe. what a start! gotta read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Prepping is very important and following a masters order is the only rule ....... So the fun begins

FranziskaSissy

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FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 months ago

Yes the real kink is starting now and riding helpless but excited the horse, hopefully the horsepower isn’t to much power to take in …. You make me wanna change places from comfy warm to riding hot

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