All Comments on 'The Happy Camper'

by needteachin

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foldedpaperfoldedpaperover 14 years ago
Nothing camp about this!

That sounds so sexy - I wish I'd been there to share this (if it's true) Outdoor sex is great - I wish I had more of it! Thanks for the fun.

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxover 11 years ago
balance

Story was 2% story and 98% sex. Aim for a more erotic balance - much more story - buildup and titillation.

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