All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good story...

but seems hard to believe that everybody is fine with her lack of clothing. No police or anything ticketing her for indecent exposure

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
ridiculous

Oh but they appreciate her and they respect her. she's no slut... This started out interesting but has gotten ridiculous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Reality whatever

I get all the reality I can handle every time I wake up. Keep on stretching the rules.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic

These stories are amazing, especially the rate at which they're being produced.

And it's a fantasy land, so there's no need for anyone ticketing her for indecent exposure.

blackgblackgover 11 years ago
Too Good

Love this installment

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.