All Comments on 'The Hard Body Shop Clerk Ch. 11'

Here's my big fat '0'. and I didn't read the dumbass thang.

not a bad story, but she becomes more and more of a whore each chapter, especially now with her getting $10k for fucks. and there's no way she would still be tight, getting fucked that much by 4 different sized cocks is gonna stretch her out

but it managed to go down hill from there.

The first word that comes to mind is STUPID

You continue to put this in exhibitionist/voyeur but it's anything but that. She's a true whore now since she's getting paid to perform. Anyone can have her as long as her bosses give the okay. Are you sure this isn't more of a stupid bimbo/sex slave thing. I give this a 0 because its so ridiculous.

...that some people have enough time on their hands to read 11 chapters of a story they hate. Get a job! I love it. Very original and Cori's hot. Keep it up.

Look I am sorry for the commenter who has such a hard on for the story that he insists on rating it unread. I think this story is very creative, and definitely well worth reading. And yes Cori is very much into what she is doing and is definitely an exhibitionist at heart. I think she also loves frequent sex and instructions.

Don't listen to the naysayers, I'm really enjoying the story.

wish there were more!