by dlsloan
dlsloan~! you are best, best, best~!!!
keep going plesae~!!!
When I read the first chapter, I was worried that these guys were going to be crude assholes like Norm, and I was seriously like, "Argh!!! Just let sweet Cori have her vacation already!!!" (I know, I know... that wouldn't have been much of a story... but still... Cori's such a sweetheart and a hottie, I just can't help but feel protective)
Anyhow, and then I read this chapter, and like Cori, I'm starting to feel a grudging respect for these three guys - they're still assholes, but creative, horny assholes - and that, I can deal with :-P
Anyways, the main thing I have been waiting so long for another Cori story and this totally does not disappoint!!! This story is HOT HOT HOT!!!!! Please write more chapters soon!!!
Welcome back, I've been checking in daily looking for the next part.
Since I love all of cori's adventures, I thought I would leave some comments on the best of the series.
Watching Cori's rules work against her in this story is great. the guys manipulation of her to get her to fully submit to them is perfect. Also, best use of nipple rings in a story in a long time.