All Comments on 'The Hard Hit'

I really enjoyed it. I don't know if you could continue the story. If you can't I'm still very glad that I read it!

Wonderful concept

Please, just one more chapter!! Great story and great writing as well,,,a rare combination here at times.

Love the story and your attention to detail.

Moar chapters!

very very horny....wish I was Naomi taking you

Oh my, so good. Please more. Romantic, sexy, hot. Lost the connection while reading, and almost cried when I couldn't get back to finish. Please, please, please, write more.

I agree with many of the other comments. The chapter is both sexy and romantic.If you wanted it could serve as the foundation for a much longer work. I am sure many of your readers would like to see how David and Naomi's relationship evolves. Suppose David's employers find out who his new companion really is. How far would he go to protect him/her? I certainly would like to know.

Thank you all so much for the wonderful feedback and comments. I was reading the novels about Keller, by Lawrence Block, and decided to combine that with my little transsexual/transformation fascination, and I'm very happy with how it came out and the reception. I wasn't really planning on writing more on this but I think I will, I like the characters and I would also like to see what happens with them. I have a few other storylines going: The Chalice of Change, Finding Himself in Her and Reborn, so this may take a while before it gets the continuation it deserves.

Really liked it but continue the story what's next

I just posted the second chapter, it's a bit shorter than this one, but hopefully it's enough to satisfy.