All Comments on 'The Harem Tales Vol. 01 Ch. 03-04'

Great story. But I'd like to know more about this universe of your stories. I'm sure there are others who would like that too. This novel you are writing, perhaps you can think of posting them in installments here on Literotica. Maybe the readers' reactions and feedbacks will keep you motivated to eventually finish the novel.

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What is flewn? As in ‘had flewn by’?

It can’t be that you were looking for the past participle of ‘fly’, is it? As in fly, flew, flown, because that would indicate that your grammar is shit.

I am loving this story so far. Ignore the really mean grammar comment. This is a really fun and sexy fantasy, and I am looking forward to reading the rest.

I haven’t seen the inherit a harem story idea before but it’s genius and set my mind whirling with possibilities

Keep Up The Good Work!!

A man that shares his harem? That makes it NOT a harem. I'm sorry but that's garbage and you've lost a reader immediately.