by Littlest_Terror
oh oh my my oh my.....wonderful!!!!
GAWD!!! i so love this story and was so excited to have a great read ahead for the evening. Thank you for posting again so quickly with such a well written addition to this story...this story should be published and i for one...would buy it!! Please keep up the great work and thank you thank you for allowing us to read such a treat...did i say i love this story???!!*smile* respectfully fan in Texas naynay
Thanks to everyone for your wonderful feedback. I am pleased to inform you that Chapter 4 is about halfway finished, and should be ready to post within the next week or so. It has been a long time coming, I know, but I am getting into the really exciting part of the story and as I almost finished Chapter 4 I decided I wanted to go a different direction and deleted most of it. :D So, hopefully the new version will be as well-liked as Chapter 3.
Thanks again and stay tuned!
you are a very very skilled writer!!! can i take this moment to beg for ariya to not end up with lord bael? i like how you've created his character - how his actions with wren and the washerwoman make him pretty despicable, but then his affection for his "menagerie" of women makes him likeable...but i still don't think he's the right person for ariya. please please let ariya be with the Captain!
... why Ariya didn't demand her freedom in return for helping Bael with his negotiations? That would seem like a reasonable deal to me, especially since she does not want to be his slave ...