All Comments on 'The Harvest Party'

A story about a segment of the population I have no interest in. I suppose tho’ that’s creative writing. I lost interest early especially at the mention of cocaine

I do have interest! I suppose you were not invited back because, while you did what Ronnie wanted and expected, you were more of a passive participant than an active one, at least as I read your unfolding account. You complied and acquiesced, and except for the not properly enthusiastic blowjob you initiated with Jerry, you just let things happen. There's obviously a place for such people in such an event, but perhaps Ronnie wanted more from you. Perhaps he wanted you to be more like Cindy, although one hopes to a lesser degree? Cindy seemed beyond over the top. These were damaged people, as you point out in your story. You are too, perhaps, but it's a question of degree, and I have the impression you were simply not in their league. Another way to put it is that you were in over your head. Fascinating story. Five stars.