All Comments on 'The Haunted Dungeon Ch. 02'

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NIceShawnNIceShawnabout 8 years ago
Fantastic build up

When they finally...got together it was perfect. Wonderful world building. Can't wait for the next one (and all your writing)

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 8 years ago
Merging.

Much better than possession. Although I don't remember it being mentioned, I assume that she is not a virgin. She also seems to enjoy pain. I do think that you should continue this story. I would follow it. JudyLee

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Are character redemption arcs even possible? Stay tuned to find out in the Hades and Persephone spinoff. And see what happens to the Maenads!

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