All Comments on 'The Heart is a Poor Judge Ch. 02'

by kidboise

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bhart1bhart1about 6 years ago
Let me get this (ahem)...straight, 'anonymous'?

You hate this "Adam and Steve shit", yet you sought out the Gay Male section? Methinks the 'lady' doth protest too much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

... someone seems to be purposefully rating you low. I have noticed that on this site when an author is really good. This story is every bit as well written as Mikey and the Chickadee ( which I just figured out was published work so bought it on iBooks). Believe in yourself. You really are that good.

judojonjudojonabout 6 years ago
very nice

So know how Miguel feels as i grew up i was taken to a physc. and told it was just a sickness but all that did is cover up your true feelings and leeds to a life that sould have never been Do hope you continue thanks John

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
You're so very talented...

Your writing had such a distinctive cadence with such vivid imagery. The story build up has the reader on edge waiting for what will happen next.

Thank you so much for sharing.

o2byoungo2byoungabout 6 years ago
Your writing is fascinating!

It's like a breath of fresh air to read your stories. Some authors on here seem to be incapable of writing anything beyond steamy sex--after steamy sex--after 3 or 4 fuck scenes in the same night, with no plot at all. Your stories are captivating.

In my opinion, Lit-erotica should add a new category 'Gay Romance' to give authors like you and me a proper place for our stories! Great writing, kid.

ChillinPeteChillinPeteover 5 years ago
Great Characters

The mom in this story is so sad. Love the secondary characters in this story.

StraycatndcStraycatndcalmost 2 years ago

OMG, this tugged at my heart.

“We must give all God's creatures their dignity, especially in death.”

No living creature deserves to be tortured. I actually cried a little read this.

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Just someone who loves to write. Originally from Boise, Idaho. Now living in Vancouver, British Columbia. So glad to hear that some of you are enjoying my stories. Follow me on twitter/instagram: kid8oise