All Comments on 'The Heart is a Poor Judge Ch. 04'

I love your writing and I've been hoping that you would continue the series. I've grown fond of Gabe and Miguel.

Your writing is excellent. Please continue. I’m loving this story.

The end caught me off guard. Lovely. & the writing is beautiful as always.

...for your kind comments. This story is meaning so much to me as I write it. Glad people out there are enjoying it.

There is a 3 1/2 month gap between this submission and the last one. I understand that good writing (and this is GOOD) takes time and you probably have a day job, but please do not make me wait another three months for the next chapter. Edging gets painful if it's drawn out that long. You have a fan base and responsibilities now.

I do have a day job, but still working as often as time allows on this one (which isn't so often, sometimes, unfortunately). With that said, Ch. 05 should be ready for upload in a few days.

Looove this story. Keep writing.

"Not as a habit." He motioned for Miguel to hand over his half-spent cigarette. "But if I have some first I won't taste it on you." Crank it up, dude. We're listening.