All Comments on 'The Hired Hand'

by Deadwood

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natureluvrgirlnatureluvrgirlalmost 15 years ago
Loved it!

Beautiful! Hot and passionate, with real emotion and tenderness thrown in to boot! Keep it up hon! :~)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
okay effort...

for some reason wasn't erotic for me. I tried to masturbate to it, since i find nudism very arousing, but i think the fact that the guy is injured and in pain when he gets a blowjob kinda sours the mood. Never mix serious bodily injury and go into a sex scene. just doesnt work - for me that is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fence Posts

Didn't you do any research before you wrote this? You don't pound wooden fence posts into the ground! You use a post hole digger to dig a hole!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
word choise

sorry, pet peeve. it's spurred on, not spurned. Spurned means rejection or disdain. and you used it twice, so i figured it wasn't just a spelling error.

NaturallyGroovyNaturallyGroovyover 4 years ago
Please, Deadwood...

This tale demands a follow-up!

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