All Comments on 'The Hired Help Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ok...

It hasn't improved since last chapter. Reread the whole of your story before submitting because sometimes it just doesn't make sense...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome

totally luv da story pliz continue- wiked_laila@yahoo.com

SFWoodsSFWoodsover 13 years ago
The first two chapters...

...have me very intrigued. I'll be on the lookout for the next installment. Good stuff so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep it coming

I'm loving it I'm actually looking forward to rereading it which is more than usually do on this site.

j1969j1969over 13 years ago
got potential...

Do a little more editing and proofing before you put it up.

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
BRILLIANT STORY

I'm hooked on your story! Please get themchapters out as fast as you can!! And make them many

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MMM a new fave yay

Ok so whens the next update am waiting patiently pppplllllleeeeeeeeez hurry !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what was his name?

You've forgotten it already. David Foster Wallace--remember???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Keep tryin--asshole--REMEMBER--

now

WHAT WAS HIS NAME?

COMMON--SPELL IT OUT FOR ME--

WHAT WAS HIS NAME?

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