All Comments on 'The Hitchhiker'

You finally get to see yourself in print! Great story so far! Waiting for more! :)

Nice little story... except NOTHING about it is erotic.

This is my first submission. When I write I develope a background to my characters and my stories have a plot. There are 7 chapters to this story! if you are looking for erotica don't judge me on my first chapter. Wait a while, there's more to come. There is sex in this story, just be patient with me.

thanks

One of the best two "Romantic/non erotic" stories

It is a real wonderful short story .

Nice story with nice characters. Very romantic. We want them to have a happily ever after. Please forgive me for making a suggestion: watch the hero's language - at time it "sounds" feminine.