All Comments on 'The Holiday Shopping Interlude'

Life takes unusual turns sometimes, but still, she did cheat on Robert, shouldn't she at least have some "guilt" about that....I mean I don't think she should lay it all on him, but it was pretty selfish to have that interlude with Dennis without any regrets or concerns about Robert and her family.

A 5 star effort for the outstanding story you have contributed to this site!

You must have taken the time to do some re-writes and self editing because tha pace of your work is so smooth. It rings true. People who play the, "I wonder ...," game in their minds, and we all do, rarely have an opportunity such as this presented to them. Speaking strictly for myself I'll admit to both playing the afore mentioned game and taking advantage of an opportunity when it came my way.

Excellent!!

A gentle story

I had the same thought. These things could happen, but this women had no regrets at anytime for cheating on her husband and family. Okay, I can see in the heat of lust, it may not have crossed her mind, but once she got home, she was more concerned logging her adultery in her diary. To me a twinge of guilt would have made this story better. Otherwise a pretty good story, well written and erotic. Definitively better than most stories posted. (ML) 4*

Kerry is referred to as Kelly in the beginning, then you say Chloe is the one at Jeanne's instead of the twins. Other than that, well done.

Her husband has become an admirable guy-giving up his high stress job to be with his family. She is still hugging herself with selfish memories of ephemeral pleasure. Totally oblivious of her betrayal, of him, her marriage. her family and herself. What a nasty piece of work she is-and completely unaware of it.

Oh boo HOO poor little slutty skank Cathy is having a rough patch In her marriage, so she has to have another man stick his cock in her cunt and shoot his cum in her body. She should have spent more time trying to love her husband and help with his problems at work, that would have time better spent . Too bad she didn't get knocked up with a bastard baby and Robert had the balls to divorce her and leave her with as little as possible. And, do something legal to fuck up Dennis's life. I hope the author has the guts to continue this story with Robert finding out what a skanky cheating slut she has been, by maybe finding her diary open and reading it. Then taking the above appropriate action

It was well written story about two people who needed something that happened to them and embraced it. It sounds like real life to me and I liked it. So all the haters who wrote negative comments should just fuck off. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you again for the good story- Michael

Both needed release from marriage frustration. :